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Coated with sugar, lies, and lullabies
Sprinkled over ingenuous, pristine, souls
Feigned distraught at the amiable, the blithe, the incapable, the lie
Omitting the ugly, the deplorable, the trepidatious, the mortification
Swept under the carpet, the truth of sabotage remains in disparage.
Sprinkled over ingenuous, pristine, souls
Feigned distraught at the amiable, the blithe, the incapable, the lie
Omitting the ugly, the deplorable, the trepidatious, the mortification
Swept under the carpet, the truth of sabotage remains in disparage.
incomplete...random weird lil poem to avoid hw.
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i like the concept. but the vast vocabulary just makes it seem.... unnatural. idk. like you had a dictionary right next to you and wanted to seem smart. HAHA jk, not that your not smart. but ive done a poem like this before, with so many complicated vocab words. and when i read it over later, it just didn't..... seem to fit me. yeah. lol. btu idk just my opinion.